Open+Argument

I actually had to re-write this essay from scratch because I had lost my written copy. Due to it being more recent, it is definitely better than my old essays. I actually had a Universal Idea, which many of my essays lacked, and several examples for a counter argument. In fact, most of my essay is a addressing the counter argument. I also got to use knowledge I obtained from my history class, which was really cool. I used three different examples, albeit two related. I thought I effectively refuted the counter argument and explained my ideas clearly. I also thought I did a good job at connecting back to my universal idea and main thesis with both my counter argument address and my main argument. Overall, I thought I did fairly well on this essay although there are some minor flaws.